TheBellmaker's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smile]

Good work!

I thought smile was "weixiao" I see xiao, but the other two I can't read :/
But that aside...

I think the face is the best part of this picture. It's definitely proportionate and for the most part anatomically correct for your purpose. Although I don't understand how the hair got behind the eyes....

As for the rest of the body, I think you mostly need to work on symmetry. Either arm looks okay, but when you put the two unlike limbs together, it looks a bit weird. Same goes for the legs.

P.S. you should have drawn a smile on her face haha

NekoMika responds:

Yea, I used google translator that day since I was kind of in a rush. :-(

The face is nice I agree, I tried to get the color as close to human skin color as possible as well. I guess I was trying something where sometimes you can see the person's eye despite the hair for some reason.

Symmetry was not my strong point here and an 30 minutes there is not much room for evening it out and giving shades and such to it.

Yea, I guess could have added a smile to his face. :P

[Skuvari]

Level 30 Skuvari appeard!

TheBellmaker uses review!

Excellent pieve of work you have here. Definitely looks like some monster you'd find in maplestory or another mmorpg. Maybe the wings could have been a little bigger...eh, small detail. The shading is good, and it gives the Skuvari some necessary depth.

As for the lasers, maybe you could have added something at the source? Maybe a ring around the eye to indicate that the laser had just been fired, or maybe some radiating lines (like the ones you see in animes that come from people's mouth when they scream really really loud).

Good work!

NekoMika responds:

Thanks. If you view it in full size you can see a light amount of stuff around the eyes showing that it is firing the lasers. Kind of bent the one laser beam sadly. Thanks a lot for the review though. :-)

[Stranger Eye]

Disregard camera, acquire scanner.

Most home printers nowadays even come with a scanner. Or if you're in school, I am sure that you could find a scanner to upload your pictures. Either way, it's much better taking pictures of your pictures. But that aside

First things first, I'm not an artist so don't take my review *too* seriously. I'll just point out some things that I like and don't like as an outside observer.

-Color selection: Even though there aren't a wide variety of colors, the ones that you did choose fit perfectly. I also like how the picture is top-heavy, giving the feeling of riding on top of a cloud or such.

-Subject matter: I like how you included a balanced mix of recognizable and abstract components. Definitely something pleasant to look at.

The title is definitely fitting, as it looks like something I would encounter in a fantasy world or in a dream.

NekoMika responds:

Yea thanks for the review. I used to do little sketches and doodles like this all the time in high school. Gave a couple to my one teacher, I asked for a couple back at the end of senior year and she never let me have them back for some reason, great doodles lost forever I guess. :-(

Thanks for the review though. :-)