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[[TMM43] Por Que No]

Porque es excelente.

Yes, this is an awesome song. The intro was splendid as it caught my attention quite quickly. As the song progressed, it simply swept me away. The melody flowed very nicely. Sounded very sad, yet hopeful. This song pwns, what more can one say?

Suggestions: none. Excellent job senior.

P.S. do you use FL Studio? If so whats the name of the main lead? I have been looking for a while.

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[Fanatic Public Enemy (DjD)]

Very nice.

The intro could have used a bit of work, but it was ok. The drum were awesome. The bassline flowed very nicely, too. This song makes me think of a robot army marching around the streets. Very job.

Suggestions: I did not detect any major melodies. Maybe you could create one, so it would make the song way more interesting?

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Mad-Muppet responds:

Thanks for some great criticism! I tried some melodies, but i couldn't get them to flow correctly... but thanks anyways :P

[Subconscious Invasion]

Nice beat to it.

The intro was actually pretty good. It created a good atmosphere for the rest of the song. You also a nice solid bass drum going on too. Transitions were smooth, too. After the first minute or so the song kicks it up a notch. Great job man!

Suggestions: Intro was very long. Everything after the intro was AWESOME. the intro was kinda repetitive, too. You should either make your intros shorter or more interesting.

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[Riding on ALL night]

ALL right...

The intro was very nice. well done. Then after that, the song got going well nicely. The melodies flowed very nicely, too. I liked the different parts of the song, Great work man!

suggestions: Transitions = nil. The song hopped around quite a bit, and it sometimes threw me off. Try and put some real transitions in there next time.

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piggy123 responds:

ok i will people i know said that to

[(FMC) -=In Slow Motion=-]

Interesting genre.

The intro was pretty koo. Caught my attention pretty kool. The guitar sound was really mysterious. then at 1:05 or so the drums came andreally took the song away. very nice there. I agree that it does sound muddled, but in a good way.

Suggestions: The snare was a bit overpowering. it kinda blurted out everything else. Might wanted to turn it down a bit.

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[Jxl180 - Endless Night]

Good song made in FL

The intro was expertly done. grabbed my attention right away. A nice and solid beat throughout the whole song. The voices were a nice touch. The musci flowed very well too. Great job

Suggestions: you need to have some type of beat variation. With a simple hit on every beat the bass drum feels like its boring into my head. syncopate the beat or something like that and you'll be fine.

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jxl180 responds:

Ok, i'll see what i can do for my next song.

Thank you.

[(FMC) -=Soaring=- V2]

Rough intro, BUT

at about :20 the song really gets going. The strings were a very nice touch. The delay added a somewaht dreamy and muddled feeling to the song. The song really had a calming feeling over me. The transisiotn were very smooth too. Great job man!

Suggestions: I gonna have to agree with Haggard. That clap doesn't fit very well. I bet you could find another one very quickly. And you might want to turn the delay on the piano down just a tad. It would make everything a bit easy to listen to.

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[just rock on]

>:P

Well, this song had sorta a riff going on. NIce rhythm, too.

Suggestions: I really couldn't find any coherence in this track. Very unorganized. And the tune would flow kool for a bit then all of a sudden a bad chord would kick in an ruin the moment. Try again.

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piggy123 responds:

now that is a good review because of this part Suggestions:

[Ake 2]

Rock on!

The intro completey blew me away. Then it shifted into a slower mode. A nice laid back feeling to this song. Then a :50 the song tok a sharp turn, but it came back nicely. Transitions were adequately smooth. Great work

Suggestions: that sharp turn at :50 was kinda out of place. I think there could have been a better transistion.

svere responds:

Mission accomplished. The "turn" might have been too extreme. Thanks for the review!

[Stuck on a Name]

I hear an FL user.

I recognize that loop in the beggining and the Eurogate. the drums in the beggining were kool. Then the drums changed a bit to give more variety. The song flowed very nicely and the transisitons were smooth. Good work.

Suggetsions: something is missing from this song. I think you could have introduced a main lead of some sort rather than just use a loop. A melody would have been real nice.

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jxl180 responds:

I guess you use fl too. I wish i could make melodies.