Score: 10

"Weeeeeeeeee...."

submission: Toss the Turtle

date: August 20, 2009

Its kinda like kitty cannon but A BAZILLION TIMES BETTER. I really like how you can control your turtle in flight and have some contrl on what he lands on.

My Record: 1,276,875 feet and stopped by spikes.

Score: 9

"Awesome game"

submission: Body Ladder

date: November 4, 2008

Only one thing annoyed me and that was the link at the bottm I kept clicking on it by accident.

Score: 8

"Amusing."

submission: SSBB: Pit's Wii Remote

date: July 28, 2008

I could see you worked on the main character quite a bit. The storyline was pretyy short, but to the point. Voice acting was kool, and the sfx were well timed. The flash was also pretty funny, too. Good work!

Suggestions: The flash was short. very short. like these. sentences that. I am. writing now. There needs to be something that comes after, maybe kirby destroying the wiimote?

#Review Request Club#

Score: 9

"Good song"

submission: New York Lights

date: March 26, 2009

got your pm, be happy to review

I really like your song. It sounds really professional to me. You really do have what it takes to be a techno/trance artist. I liked the variety of instruments and melodies you used in there. It does really paint a picture of new york lights.

Suggestions: I'd say the only thing you would need to work in is your transitions. They could be more smooth and less of a division between two parts. Fades, stops, and purely transitional bars work really well in songs. But transitions are limited to just these three methods. Think of unique ways to make your songs flow more easily. Great job though.

Score: 9

"Very interesting"

submission: Adderall Rush

date: March 5, 2009

Nice intro. Piano intros are always good. The themes in this song were very strange in a good way. Good use of precussion. Very interesting use of synths. Overall a very smooth composition.

Suggestions: could be a little more organized. Seems to shift around alot. Other than that everything else was kool.

Score: 9

"Nice song"

submission: {MSX} Blue Piano

date: December 12, 2008

vi-V-IV-III = one of the best chord progressions for trance (and most songs in general). The piano seemed very dynamic. Nice bassline and accompanying instruments. Tip: if you are afraid of being repetitive, its good to make shorter songs.

Suggestions: ehh, still a bit repetive, and since you have mostly triads on the piano, its stresses the repititiveness. To fix.... Suprise me! Do something I would never expect, but not so akward so that it takes away from the meaning of the song. Have a stop or introduce a new instrument/theme. That's what I do when I feel my songs are really repetitve. Another good trick is to interchange percussions instruments, having just kick here and clap and hihat here, which I do see in this song, which is good. In short, mix in some new things now and then within the song. But since I do enjoy this song, I give you a nine and a five.