Well, there's not much to say about this. I guess the drum loop is pretty good, but it does get repetitive after a while. Sounds like something you'd find in the main menu of any flash game. Not really sure
And about the animation: to be honest, I used flash for about 3 days before quitting, and I could have animated this. Perhaps this can be used as proof that you know how to create a .swf file and put it on newgrounds, but outside of that, I don't see why you bothered uploading this. Maybe I'm just not in the spirit of clock day....
I actually found this quite humorous. The computer voice is so damn funny when you juxtapose it with ganstas, weed, and clocks. The intentional mispellings were very funny to read. Lol at the disclaimer at the end
I think this flash has lots of potential. Perhaps you could have done more on screen shenaniganery as the gansta was talking. Like when he talks about the cops, maybe have some cops chase a gangsta in the bg or something? But overall, good work!
I could see you worked on the main character quite a bit. The storyline was pretyy short, but to the point. Voice acting was kool, and the sfx were well timed. The flash was also pretty funny, too. Good work!
Suggestions: The flash was short. very short. like these. sentences that. I am. writing now. There needs to be something that comes after, maybe kirby destroying the wiimote?
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Yes it is short, but wasn't going to make something long for my first effort. Glad you liked it though and thanks for the review.
Haha I really liked this flash. What did you use to make it? Adobe Aftereffects? cause that was some pretty awesome squirt laser gun action right there. It was funny how you and the other guy were so close and shooting each other. The charge beam was a nice addition too. Great job man!!
Suggestions: I think you could put more special effects in the next one (if there is one). Like grenades or airstrikes or something crazy like that. But this one was still pretty awesome.
I got your PM so I won't say anything about that part here. Yeah, I guess we could go crazy with some shit like you suggested. When I get my own camera I will be sure to come back and make a crazy star wars movie sometime. Sadly our new movie won't have any animation at all. YOUTUBE RIGHT? Ha, thanks for the review.
you crazy killer!
haha, very nice concept for this flash. I think its pretty kool when people can mix computer graphics with reality. Like this guy did it with a 3-d car. but back to the flash. The animation was very precise. I didn't see any time lag between the two worlds. The blood was not highest quality, but still was animated pretty well. Chopping up sitck figures is fun, eh?
Suggestions: I guess you could have made it a bit longer. and maybe introduce new instruments of torture in your later shorts? a knife is pretty fun for about a minute, but then you run out of ideas quick. Great work man!
Great flash we have here. storyline was retty kool. Being a trailer, you did have too have too much introduction, I guess. The drawing was ok, at least making things look realistic. The animations, however, was really good, although I could tell it was looping alot. sfx and voice acting were up to par. And I really liked the interactivity of this flash.
Suggestions: Guess the drawing could have been better. And I also didn't like how it just cut off at the end and I was back at the title screen with no cursor. But since this is only a trailer we can expect greater things to come. Good work
awww its sparky.
Extremely professional looking and the quality isn't bad at all. I could see the 6 months of work in this flash. The drawing was splendid. Very consistent. The animations was subperb. It was almost like a kiddy show on TV. And the voice acting was pure awesome. the kid sounded legit. while the evil professor sounded like he could take over the world at any minute. Great job man!
Suggestions: none. Congrats on your awards.
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First Submission eh?
A very great first submission if I do say so myself. Although I've never listened the to Beatles :/ I really liked how you made this music video. The animation was pretty good. I liked how you could listen with or without subtitles. The music was nice and clear, too. Great job man.
Suggestions: The "spatla hands" kinda started annoying me a little. Maybe you could draw a very basic hand instead. And if you could include some form of color, whether it be background or clothes, in your next flashes that would be kool, too.
P.S. I'm learning flash too and my first won't be that great :/
yo ho yo ho...
Awesome collab sitting right in front of me. I'm gonna have to agree with Coop. the preloader is quite addictive. A good time waster for impatient people while the movie loads. As for the actual movie. Every did a great job creating a pirate themed short. The stick figure fighting was my personal favorite. And the pirate with teh uzi made me lol. The music complemented the movie perfectly. Great job everyone!!
Suggestions: A great idea would be to replace the menu button with a play moive button so no one is confused. Thats all.
Thanks for the review :D
A very good flash movie if I do say so myself. The sprite animation was flawless (at least I couldn't pick out any flaws). It was all very smooth. The voice acting was awesome too. I was expecting subtitles, but when I heard voices I was like "yes!". Storyline was also a plus. Makes me want to see the next one.
Suggestions: Only thing I can think of was that sometimes the voices were to loud or soft compared to the background music or other voices. Some quick knob turns could solve that problem, though. Great job overall.
Yeah I definitely have to get my audio game up
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