Score: 8

"you want more reviews?"

submission: A Dark Night In Heavan

date: August 9, 2008

Well, you're gonna get one from me now.

A nice little piece we have here. The intro was nicely done. set the atmosphere in a mysterious yet dark mood. The piano was well done. I think there was a key change in the middle? The solo in the middle was quite intruiging. The melodies flowed very nicely, too. Good work man!

Suggestions: Well, I think the song was a bit too basic. two instruments doing different melodies. I just feel like there needs to be something else that comes in. Maybe strings or something like that? And your transitions could be a bit smoother, too.

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P.S. if you want you can check out my latest submission a sad sounding song

Score: 10

"....."

submission: B|3 salvation

date: August 8, 2008

Epic win. Very nice song. I just blasted it with my fave cannon.

Score: 8

"I dun think it sucks."

submission: HypnoTrance

date: August 8, 2008

The intro was very nice. A very kool percussion beat you have there, after the intro creating a more solid beat. The main riff is very catchy. The instruments add very well to the song. The transitions are nice and suave. Great work.

Suggestions: Usually when I think of trance I think of dance leads and eurogates. But since my first trance song was like that either, I'm not going to count it against you. What you maybe could work on is a bit more variety. Maybe through in a coupld sfx or a new instrument halfway through. I mean its a completekly awesome riff. It just needs some accompaniment. Nice job though!

Score: 8

"Kool rendition"

submission: Tricksy Halloween

date: August 7, 2008

Well, I promised I would review your latest submission, so here I am.

The intro was nicely done. the piano was mysterious and dark. Then I liked the middle part where it kicks into hip hopish. The drums were all over the place!! Outro was kool, with a recapitulation of the main theme. Good work.

Suggestions: I think you should work on you transitions a bit more. The song kinda jump around and lost me at times. All the parts are great. You just need to connect them properly.

Score: 9

"Cellos rock"

submission: Cello Trio II

date: August 7, 2008

This song makes me makes me think of some sort of deserted battlefield being rained upon. THis song flows very nicely, man. btw Strings are my favorite classical instruments. Keep up of the good work.

Suggestions: maybe if the cello went a bit higher in some parts it could create a sadder sound. Or you could include a violin

Score: 10

"Sweet."

submission: Chill Wave

date: July 29, 2008

Its me again reviewing your song.

Very nice composition. I liked the chord progressions alot, as well as the guitar riff. You altered your voice pretty well, but with my sharp ears I can pick out the original :). The delay was a nice addition well done Paul. You have been faved.

Suggestions: the really fast hihat sample was sorta out of place. something lighter would be better, since this is the chill wave.

~Bellmaker.

Score: 9

"Its been a while..."

submission: Lylat Wars [orchestral]StarFox

date: July 26, 2008

I was going through my news posts and I remembered I promised to check out your stuff. So here I am.

This song is pretty nice. I remember hearing part of this song in SSBM. Its actually pretty cacthing. I like the way you ochestrated it, while keeping the original still intact. The melodies flowed very smoothly, and the transitions were nice and suave. Good work

Suggestions: 15 mins!?!?!?!?! how'd you squeeze that into 8 megs? WEll that doesn't matter. I don't think I could ever listen a 15 minute song through unless it kept my attention for at least the first five minutes. It had me going but the song seems a bit static for my taste (static means it doesn't move around alot). I kept waiting for something tremendous to happen. I think that maybe you could split the song into parts so that people could refresh themselves after each part? And maybe try not to repeat melodies too much? Other than that this song was great :)

Hit me back, man.

Score: 9

"Thats kool"

submission: SkyTemple

date: July 21, 2008

Nice metal feeling to it. its mysterious yet impending at the same time. I like it!

Suggestions: Theres some white noise going on. I dunno how you could get rid of it. If you use FL you would have to use a compressor

btw THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE FAVE!!!!!! sorry for the late thanks but I wanted to wait until you submitted more stuff.

Score: 2

"I want my money back."

submission: Tell Your Mother

date: July 21, 2008

Interesting

Suggestions: I'm not sure this qualifies as a song. A song has instruments ore leads that make melodies and percussion. A bunch of voice clips/recordings just doesn't cut it. I'm not sure what you wanted to get out of this. Try again.

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Score: 6

"All your souls are belong to me."

submission: Dont Listen To This Song!

date: July 21, 2008

The intro was interesting. the guitar created a creepy feeling. the little sound sfx in the background sorta made everything wierd. the electric guitarwas kool, too.

Suggestions: MOAR VARIATIONS. this song is really repetitve. it doesn't really go anywhere. and the parts near the end really drag on. it needs to have more melodies introduced.

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