TheBellmaker's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Dot of Excellence 2]

I still don't get it.

Very nice picture gallery.

Suggestions: I must say, this was even worse that the first. At least the first had some animation, W\while this was a bunch of pics and music. Come on man, you gotta do better than that. Spend some more time on your flashes, make a storyline, and put some real animation into it. How in the world did this pass judgement?

P.S. I looked and saw 2 more dots of excellence :'(

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[The Dot of Excellence]

I don't get it.

Only good thing about his flash was the music

Suggestions: I wonder how much time you spent on this. Maybe 3 minutes at most? I recommend that if you are going to submit something to the FP spend at least 45 minutes on it. And try to be a bit more imaginiative. 3 sprites and a dot with a face just doesn't cut it. How in the world did this pass judgement?

P.S. Oh noes theres a dot of excellence 2 :'(

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[Dragonball Z Episode 2]

Needs improvement.

The Title screen was awesome. The graphics were a little above average. the music was kool, too.

Suggestions: The animation was really slow, too slow to be real. The storyline, if there was one, was really hard to follow. In conclusion, you need to spend a little more time on your flashes.

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[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 6]

YOU FORGOT THE PIN!!!!

Excellent. This flash was short, sweet, and to the point. It definitely made me lol. The joke was very unexpected, but original as well. The drawing could have been better, but that really wasn't a large focus in this flash. Great J\job M\man!

Suggestions: although the drawing wasn't a big focus, it could have been better. That's all that's keeping me from giving you a 10. sry :(.

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Jimtopia responds:

Meh, I could draw them much better, but I don't because they wouldn't look right. =)

[Wegra Adventure 3]

What you say?

Nice improvment from the last 2. It wasn't so damn fast so I could actually hear what was going on. This flash has a well established storyline (Wegra goes to the museum). The randomness was very funny, like that falco punch. I could see all the effor that went into this.

Suggestions: Ditch the computer voice. It was extremely unclear and I had to turn up the volume alot to hear it. Use a mic or subtitles, like in your next one. And as I said in the last two maybe you should invest in some real animation.

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[Tywo At Large Ep. #2]

Professional yet again.

Great quality animation. the voice acting was superb. I liked how the professor's voice sonded educated and matter-of-factly. You did a very good job of making this flash imitate a classic educational video. Noxious gasses are your nose and mouth's worst enemy!

suggestion: If you wanted to make this seem even more like a training video. You should put pictures with arrows showing actions like they do on the airplanes on the saftey card. Then it would be soo awesome.

10/10
5/5

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[NEW Tywo At Large Ep. #1]

simply a masterpiece.

A very good flash indeed. The animation was awesome, in fact so awesome it looked professional. I liked how you did a run through town during the introduction. The storyline was focused and was based around an old pastime.

Suggestions: not really any. That was so professional that I wouldn't be surprised if I saw it in television. It was a flawless flash man. Keep up the good work!

10/10
5/5

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[Wegra Adventure 2]

Ummmm....

It was a lot like the first. The voice was the same except it was SLOWER so ppl could understand. That was kool.

The storyline, however, was the weak part of the flash. All I remember was something about eating a sandwich and dying. I also think the storylin goes off on too many tangents. I remember the pictures of megaman and family guy ppls. I don't think those were pertinent to the storyline of the flash.

Again there was no animation, so it was a powerpoint again. If you try at least a crude animation it would make the flash a lot better.

6 for effort

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Wegra responds:

Alright, I'm glad that I improved slightly.