TheBellmaker's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Da Clocktopia Ghetto]

teehee

I actually found this quite humorous. The computer voice is so damn funny when you juxtapose it with ganstas, weed, and clocks. The intentional mispellings were very funny to read. Lol at the disclaimer at the end

I think this flash has lots of potential. Perhaps you could have done more on screen shenaniganery as the gansta was talking. Like when he talks about the cops, maybe have some cops chase a gangsta in the bg or something? But overall, good work!

ChandlerThompson responds:

Tee hee right back atcha. Here's another one: Tee hee!

[SSBB: Pit's Wii Remote]

Amusing.

I could see you worked on the main character quite a bit. The storyline was pretyy short, but to the point. Voice acting was kool, and the sfx were well timed. The flash was also pretty funny, too. Good work!

Suggestions: The flash was short. very short. like these. sentences that. I am. writing now. There needs to be something that comes after, maybe kirby destroying the wiimote?

#Review Request Club#

MCYoshi responds:

Yes it is short, but wasn't going to make something long for my first effort. Glad you liked it though and thanks for the review.

[Hay Wars]

rolfmao

Haha I really liked this flash. What did you use to make it? Adobe Aftereffects? cause that was some pretty awesome squirt laser gun action right there. It was funny how you and the other guy were so close and shooting each other. The charge beam was a nice addition too. Great job man!!

Suggestions: I think you could put more special effects in the next one (if there is one). Like grenades or airstrikes or something crazy like that. But this one was still pretty awesome.

#Review Request Club#

Fro responds:

I got your PM so I won't say anything about that part here. Yeah, I guess we could go crazy with some shit like you suggested. When I get my own camera I will be sure to come back and make a crazy star wars movie sometime. Sadly our new movie won't have any animation at all. YOUTUBE RIGHT? Ha, thanks for the review.

[Please help me!]

First Submission eh?

A very great first submission if I do say so myself. Although I've never listened the to Beatles :/ I really liked how you made this music video. The animation was pretty good. I liked how you could listen with or without subtitles. The music was nice and clear, too. Great job man.

Suggestions: The "spatla hands" kinda started annoying me a little. Maybe you could draw a very basic hand instead. And if you could include some form of color, whether it be background or clothes, in your next flashes that would be kool, too.

P.S. I'm learning flash too and my first won't be that great :/

=Review Request Club=

flixing responds:

Thank you!

[The Pirate Collab]

yo ho yo ho...

Awesome collab sitting right in front of me. I'm gonna have to agree with Coop. the preloader is quite addictive. A good time waster for impatient people while the movie loads. As for the actual movie. Every did a great job creating a pirate themed short. The stick figure fighting was my personal favorite. And the pirate with teh uzi made me lol. The music complemented the movie perfectly. Great job everyone!!

Suggestions: A great idea would be to replace the menu button with a play moive button so no one is confused. Thats all.

=Review Request Club=

Bertn responds:

Thanks for the review :D

[SF Series Episode 1]

Sweetness.

A very good flash movie if I do say so myself. The sprite animation was flawless (at least I couldn't pick out any flaws). It was all very smooth. The voice acting was awesome too. I was expecting subtitles, but when I heard voices I was like "yes!". Storyline was also a plus. Makes me want to see the next one.

Suggestions: Only thing I can think of was that sometimes the voices were to loud or soft compared to the background music or other voices. Some quick knob turns could solve that problem, though. Great job overall.

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mortis5000 responds:

Yeah I definitely have to get my audio game up

[The Music Video Collab]

one and 4/5 thumbs up

Great music collab. THe animations were extremely well done. And they fit perfectly with the music. The was a large variety of animations and songs to listen too. Great job guys!

Suggestions: The transitions could have been a bit smoother. Sometimes I didn't know where the last song ended and the next begun. That was the last 1/5 thumb. But other than that this flash was awesome!

=Review Request Club=

Assios responds:

Thanks... The transition will be smoother in the sequel

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 6]

YOU FORGOT THE PIN!!!!

Excellent. This flash was short, sweet, and to the point. It definitely made me lol. The joke was very unexpected, but original as well. The drawing could have been better, but that really wasn't a large focus in this flash. Great J\job M\man!

Suggestions: although the drawing wasn't a big focus, it could have been better. That's all that's keeping me from giving you a 10. sry :(.

=Review Request Club=

Jimtopia responds:

Meh, I could draw them much better, but I don't because they wouldn't look right. =)

[Bahamut's Favourite PMs]

PM PM PM PM PM PM

Another great flash from you. I saw your other favorite reviews flash, and it was kool. but the PM flash was even better. Mostly because it was shorter, and I didn't have to sit there thinking "what to put in review?" for 5 minutes. The option to scroll through messages was a big plus. and there was moe animation than the review flash.

Suggestions: throw some more junk into your flash. Some random pics that show what a loser the PM sender was would be kool. thats it, so great job!

=Review Request Club=

kinggila responds:

You're right. I could have done with more stuff, but just like the reviews flash, I could have been really lazy and not add any extra stuff at all.

[Wegra Adventure 2]

Ummmm....

It was a lot like the first. The voice was the same except it was SLOWER so ppl could understand. That was kool.

The storyline, however, was the weak part of the flash. All I remember was something about eating a sandwich and dying. I also think the storylin goes off on too many tangents. I remember the pictures of megaman and family guy ppls. I don't think those were pertinent to the storyline of the flash.

Again there was no animation, so it was a powerpoint again. If you try at least a crude animation it would make the flash a lot better.

6 for effort

=Review Request Club=

Wegra responds:

Alright, I'm glad that I improved slightly.