TheBellmaker's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lylat Wars [orchestral]StarFox]

Its been a while...

I was going through my news posts and I remembered I promised to check out your stuff. So here I am.

This song is pretty nice. I remember hearing part of this song in SSBM. Its actually pretty cacthing. I like the way you ochestrated it, while keeping the original still intact. The melodies flowed very smoothly, and the transitions were nice and suave. Good work

Suggestions: 15 mins!?!?!?!?! how'd you squeeze that into 8 megs? WEll that doesn't matter. I don't think I could ever listen a 15 minute song through unless it kept my attention for at least the first five minutes. It had me going but the song seems a bit static for my taste (static means it doesn't move around alot). I kept waiting for something tremendous to happen. I think that maybe you could split the song into parts so that people could refresh themselves after each part? And maybe try not to repeat melodies too much? Other than that this song was great :)

Hit me back, man.

BowserThedestructive responds:

lowerd bitrate thats how :D i have a savefile in the description for a higher bitrate 256kbp one which isnt static and with that you can hear the orchestral i did the way its meant to be heard =D

[SkyTemple]

Thats kool

Nice metal feeling to it. its mysterious yet impending at the same time. I like it!

Suggestions: Theres some white noise going on. I dunno how you could get rid of it. If you use FL you would have to use a compressor

btw THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE FAVE!!!!!! sorry for the late thanks but I wanted to wait until you submitted more stuff.

EpicMastermind responds:

Thankyou very much for the review!

[Tell Your Mother]

I want my money back.

Interesting

Suggestions: I'm not sure this qualifies as a song. A song has instruments ore leads that make melodies and percussion. A bunch of voice clips/recordings just doesn't cut it. I'm not sure what you wanted to get out of this. Try again.

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KlanMaster911 responds:

It was meant to be a joke.

Its more of an inside joke really..

Thanks though.

[Dont Listen To This Song!]

All your souls are belong to me.

The intro was interesting. the guitar created a creepy feeling. the little sound sfx in the background sorta made everything wierd. the electric guitarwas kool, too.

Suggestions: MOAR VARIATIONS. this song is really repetitve. it doesn't really go anywhere. and the parts near the end really drag on. it needs to have more melodies introduced.

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KlanMaster911 responds:

I shall take this into consideration the next time I make a song.

Thanks.

[Soul Summon]

Almost..

The voices and sfx were kool. It was kinda creepy. not bad.

Suggestions: I really dislike it when people make songs out of sound clips and sfx. If you really want to make a good song, use a realy instrument and create melodies. Only then will you begin to master the art of songwriting.

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KlanMaster911 responds:

I already have my own personal formula for my own personal songs.

This is meant to be funny..Not serious.

Thanks though,

[Song of Storms (Windmill Song)]

Piano is kool

Although I never played legend of zelda, I like this song. It sorta makes me think of a productive village of some sorts (maybe its supposed to do that?). I liked you classical touch. The transitions were also very smoooooth. Great song Angel!!!!

Suggestions: I'm sorry, but I can't give you a 10 due to the fact that this was made from a preexisting song. If this was completely original I'd 10 it. Sorry man. Maybe you could come up with something better next time?

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Expectrum responds:

Thanks a lot =)

And yes, I am working on something completely original right this moment. I must say I'm pretty excited about it... let's see how it comes out ;)

[Beach Melo Remake 2008]

Get up and Dance!

The intro was smashing. Caught my attention very well. Then the song progressed qutie niclye after that. There was a nice solid beat, like all dance songs should have. The bassline was pretty awesome. The piano part was kool. Transitions were also very smooth.

Suggestions: The beginning was sorta uneventful. I kept waiting for something kool to happen until the piano came in. Might wanna throw in something to keep your audience interested.

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FlamingFirebolt responds:

Like i said below, im always bad in intro's. I could have made it better, and i suspose longer. And the 303-ish sound was really rushed so it sounded out of place and really bad Eqed. First i tryd without that synth in the intro. But then it sounded so boring that it wasn't worthy to listen till the chorus. So, i didn't know what to do. Ah well.. Next time i'll do better. :)

[Unfinished Story (original)]

A review hot out of the oven

The intro was pretty kool. The ahhh in the background added to the atmosphere quite nicely. Very nice solid beats. I liked how you kinda switched around from genre to genre. I really think this song isn't too bad. Good job man

Suggestions: I think this song could be a bit more refined. Balance some volume levels. add some effects and stuff like that. Then it would be finished.

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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

ill give it a check on the levels, they might need some more equalization work , saddly ive been short of time but ill give it a shot, on the effects part, what do u suggest? like sweeps and stuff like that?

[+Factory+]

100th time's a charm.

The intro was made of awesomeness. The bassline was well established with some pretty kool melodies in there. I really feel like I'm in some kind of factory. Everything was overpowering, but in a very kool way. Very awesome job man!!!!!!

Suggestions: none. this song pwns

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WritersBlock responds:

lol thanks. I'm thinking of doing more of this metal grinding, hard hitting industrial/factory-esque songs, if I get the time...

[Lost In Her Eyes-eugenio.mRMX]

Kool Remix.

The intro was very unique. Kinda like this song is being played in a club or something. There was a nice solid beat going on. I can still hear the origianl in this remix, which is of course good. Great work man!!

Suggestions: Sometiems the son would get a bit repetitive. Something new shouild come in during those parts.

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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(

i aprecuate your review, ill fix the repetiveness , since ive notice all the reviews say the same on that topic ;P , i kinda had my doubts on the intro but i guess it came out good :D