TheBellmaker's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[+Pandora's Dance+]

Soothing for the soul.

The harp intro was excellent. Then as the strings come in the song takes a more solemn stand. The piano comes in and lights everything up. The drums wre very well done if I do say so myself. The melodies flowed like melted butter. Great job man!!

Suggestions: I think the ending could have been a bit better. Something not too fancy but enough to satisfy the audience. Thats all

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WritersBlock responds:

Hopefully I'm going to play around with this song a bit more , so we'll se what happens. I do hope to improve on this.
Thanks for the review.

[-Air and Rain-]

Air and rain don't mix....

Unless you put them together in an awesome track like this. The intro was quite awesome. The piano flowed very nicely with the thunder and rain in the background. It somehow brought back memories of Dark Cloud 2 :/. As it melts into trance at 1:15 it gets even better. Had a very nice beat to it. Everything about this song was legit.

Suggestions: Maybe some strings in the intro? That would really add to the atmosphere. Great work man!

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Gloudas responds:

ya I'll probably go back at some point and add some strings, but for now I like the emptiness at the beginning of the song, and I'm lazy :D
Thanks for the review!

[Fanatic Public Enemy (DjD)]

Very nice.

The intro could have used a bit of work, but it was ok. The drum were awesome. The bassline flowed very nicely, too. This song makes me think of a robot army marching around the streets. Very job.

Suggestions: I did not detect any major melodies. Maybe you could create one, so it would make the song way more interesting?

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Mad-Muppet responds:

Thanks for some great criticism! I tried some melodies, but i couldn't get them to flow correctly... but thanks anyways :P

[Riding on ALL night]

ALL right...

The intro was very nice. well done. Then after that, the song got going well nicely. The melodies flowed very nicely, too. I liked the different parts of the song, Great work man!

suggestions: Transitions = nil. The song hopped around quite a bit, and it sometimes threw me off. Try and put some real transitions in there next time.

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piggy123 responds:

ok i will people i know said that to

[Jxl180 - Endless Night]

Good song made in FL

The intro was expertly done. grabbed my attention right away. A nice and solid beat throughout the whole song. The voices were a nice touch. The musci flowed very well too. Great job

Suggestions: you need to have some type of beat variation. With a simple hit on every beat the bass drum feels like its boring into my head. syncopate the beat or something like that and you'll be fine.

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jxl180 responds:

Ok, i'll see what i can do for my next song.

Thank you.

[just rock on]

>:P

Well, this song had sorta a riff going on. NIce rhythm, too.

Suggestions: I really couldn't find any coherence in this track. Very unorganized. And the tune would flow kool for a bit then all of a sudden a bad chord would kick in an ruin the moment. Try again.

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piggy123 responds:

now that is a good review because of this part Suggestions:

[Ake 2]

Rock on!

The intro completey blew me away. Then it shifted into a slower mode. A nice laid back feeling to this song. Then a :50 the song tok a sharp turn, but it came back nicely. Transitions were adequately smooth. Great work

Suggestions: that sharp turn at :50 was kinda out of place. I think there could have been a better transistion.

svere responds:

Mission accomplished. The "turn" might have been too extreme. Thanks for the review!

[Stuck on a Name]

I hear an FL user.

I recognize that loop in the beggining and the Eurogate. the drums in the beggining were kool. Then the drums changed a bit to give more variety. The song flowed very nicely and the transisitons were smooth. Good work.

Suggetsions: something is missing from this song. I think you could have introduced a main lead of some sort rather than just use a loop. A melody would have been real nice.

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jxl180 responds:

I guess you use fl too. I wish i could make melodies.

[+Utopia+]

W000000T!!!

Very nice intro. starts out small tham bam everything comes in. The ahhhh in the background fitted perfectly. This song makes me think of a huge city, with bustling cars and people rushing to work. Great work!

Suggestions: I guess there could have been some panning. It would add to the metropolitan like feel.

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WritersBlock responds:

Yeah, panning = none
Thanks for the review.

[Enigmatic Automatic]

Mysterious.

A very nice track if I do say so myself. A nice eery feeling to it, along with a nice beat, too. This track would be perfect for like an alien planet or something like that. Nice looping structure, too. Great job man!

Suggestions: some more instruments would be greatly appreciated. This track needs some more melodies. But it IS ambient, so I dunno.

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gregaaron89 responds:

I thought about putting a little more layering into it and make it longer, but I was out of ideas so I just left it as it was rather than risk ruining it. I don't know if it's worth revisiting. Thanks for the review.