dos thumbs up
Very good, you've improved alot on your songs.
Only suggestion is that you turn down the feedback on the delay on the piano. It just makes the echo a bit softer and not clash so much with the actually notes.
Congratulations on getting 4 (now 5) reviews on one song. The most I ever had was 3 on one song.
9/10
5/5
2 days until my 9-minute song is released